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Losing

by ~KaseyKillface

The thing is, I lose everything.
I've     misplaced     all the
things I own at least twice.
No thing is safe
from disappearing,
it all slips between the threads
rough stitched fabric
of my universe.

A few weeks ago,
a pair of rose colored
rabbit-shaped earrings
went missing.
They must have scampered away
from my bedside table
as I slept.

and yesterday too my class ring,
with dragon insignia
carved into its metal side,
lost so many times
I've just stopped looking.
It always turns up again
like a hungry cat.

Long ago I bid farewell
to a book of poetry
by Billy Collins,
each page dressed
in a suit of marginalia,

kissed my favorite teacup goodbye,
the pond-green one,
topography of cracks down the side,
and one sock from almost every pair
has      fluttered free      like a pet parakeet
through the open window.

So I hope you understand, love,
why I hold you so close,
afraid that if I set you down
and turn around
for even an instant
you will            disappear,
gone the way
of so many photographs,
rusted door keys,
and two driver's permits.

Now you know why in my dreams
I forever find myself searching for you,
hands outstretched,

                                          in the dark.
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Meh. Probably going to edit this more.
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Given 2012-02-14
Losing by ~KaseyKillface ( Featured by ^Beccalicious )
love 2 2 joy 4 4 wow 1 1 mad 0 0 sad 1 1 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
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~cristinewakesuphappy May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i made a humble feature [link] on your poem. i hope you won't mind. thank you. :bow:

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poems by me: :house: [link]
"The old dreams were good dreams; they didn't work out but I'm glad I had them."
- Robert James Waller, The Bridges of Madison County
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Wow, that's awesome! I'm very flattered. :D

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"It seems only yesterday I used to believe there was nothing under my skin but light. If you cut me I could shine." -Billy Collins
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~cristinewakesuphappy May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
losing is up there in my most favorite poems in deviantart. the concept, the feel, the imagery, the impact, the tenderness: they're all there. :bow:

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poems by me: :house: [link]
"The old dreams were good dreams; they didn't work out but I'm glad I had them."
- Robert James Waller, The Bridges of Madison County
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:iconkaseykillface:
Oh my goodness! I don't check deviant art for a month or so, and when I come back it appears I've gotten a D.D.! Thank you so much! And thanks to everyone for the praise and constructive criticism; I really appreciate it! I'm probably overusing exclamation points in this post, but I'm completely ecstatic!

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"It seems only yesterday I used to believe there was nothing under my skin but light. If you cut me I could shine." -Billy Collins
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Mood: Sadness ~Desolira Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
These DD awards make my poetry feel awful. D:

Great poem, I loved the wording, I loved the way you expressed everything about it... it was easy to relate, and yet so unique that I couldn't imagine anyone else saying it quite like how you did. You deserved to be featured. ^^
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*blancaJP Feb 14, 2012   Digital Artist
I don't know how to write. I spell everything always wrong, in any language. Use the wrong words in the wrong order.

This is just a wonderful verse, it finds just the right words for that feeling of love, fear and lose. It paints a pictures that touches the heart.

great job.
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Awesome~ Congrats on the DD
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~MandyWarh0l Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is everything I needed today. Beautifully written.
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:iconmm56:
WOW!!!!!!!!!! two drivers permits lost JEEZ i thought i was a bad driver and im not even 16 yet
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~roxx0209 Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, so impressive
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